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“Another Long Night…”

Written by

Dominick Yambao

FADE IN:

EXT. CITY – NIGHT

Establishing shot

INT. /EXT. COURIER’S CAR – NIGHT

A COURIER shrouded in a black coat proceeds to his car as he carries a black suitcase handcuffed to his wrist. He places the suitcase in the back seat of his car and enters the driver seat, setting his hat aside. The COURIER prepares to start his car but looks away at the black suitcase, and contemplates on its dark contents; the COURIER turns backs to the front and starts the engine of his car.

EXT. BRISTOL/ALLEYWAY – EARLY MORNING

A cautious DETECTIVE walks down the alleyway, slightly limping as he approaches the CLIENT. The CLIENT looks to his right and turns back to the DETECTIVE.

CLIENT

Were you followed?

DETECTIVE

Can’t say I know for sure.

So… what do you need?

CLIENT gives DETECTIVE a photo of COURIER, turns around in caution briefly

CLIENT

An old friend of mine is missing.

The DETECTIVE takes the photo and analyses the image, looks to CLIENT and nods.

DETECTIVE

Where did you last see him?

CLIENT

My house, he was kicked out

Of his own place, over due rent.

DETECTIVE begins folding photo

DETECTIVE

How long has he been gone?

CLIENT

Three days.

DETECTIVE places photo in his suit pocket.

EXT. BRISTOL/ANOTHER ALLEYWAY – NIGHT

COURIER steps down the stairs

DETECTIVE

Any idea where he might be?

   CLIENT

No, he always leaves at

Night and comes back in

The middle of the day.

HITMAN quietly follows after the COURIER

CLIENT

(CONT’D)

And he always carries a black

Suitcase whenever he goes out.

DETECTIVE

Does he have a night job?

CLIENT

He hasn’t been employed for

COURIER stops and turns around briefly and proceeds to walk away

  CLIENT

 (CONT’D)

Years, but there are rumours

Going around that he’s been

In and out of places

Around the city.

HITMAN quickly tails after the COURIER with a gun concealed behind him

DETECTIVE

What kind of places?

CLIENT

Shops, factories, hotels,

You name it, but he always

Mentioned THE GOLDEN JACKAL

COURIER hears a gun cocking and notices the HITMAN and surrenders the suitcase, begging for his life.

DETECTIVE

The pub, been there once

Didn’t like their chips

Alright, if you have

Anything else, give me a call…

COURIER gazes at the gun aiming right at him

DETECTIVE

(CONT’D)

I’m on the case.

BANG.

Days of shooting for "Another Long Night"

Production schedule for "Another Long Night"

Production schedule for Another Long Night (November-December 2014)

Date and time	Scene	Shots	Actors / models	Crew?	Location	Props & costume
Saturday, 22nd November 5:30 A.M.-7:00 A.M.	Scene 1- Courier walks to car and gets inside.	Shot1-CU of Courier’s hand holding briefcase. Shot2-MLS of Courier placing suitcase in backseat Shot3-MS of Courier entering driver’s seat Shot4-Canted angle MCU of Driver activating car and turning around Shot5-CU of suitcase Shot6-Canted angle MCU of Courier turning back and activating car	Courier- Josh Kingsley-Jones	Dominick-Director & camera Phil-Lighting Dominick & Phil-Dolly crane	3 Sunnyside Road Clevedon	Trilby hat Handcuffs Trench coat Suitcase Car
Sunday, 30th November 8:00 A.M. -8:45 A.M.	Scene 2- Detective walks into alley and speaks with Client	Shot7-VLS of Detective walking into alley Shot8- MCU Two person shot of Client asking Detective Shot9-Over the shoulder shot showing Detective answering Client Shot10-Two person medium shot of characters speaking and handing photo Shot11- CU of photo being taken by the Detective Shot12- CU of Detective looking at photo Shot13- Two person medium shot of characters speaking	Detective- Dominick Yambao Client- Philip Kingsley-Jones	Josh– Camera Dominick- Director	Zig Zag Clevedon	Photo Scarf Two suits One tie Glasses
Sunday, 30th November 9:00 A.M. -10:00A.M.	Scene 3- Hitman follows Courier into alley, confrontation	Shot14- BGU of lower halves of the Courier and Hitman walking down the stairs Shot15- MLS of the Courier turning around and walking away quickly as Hitman follows with a gun (lower halves) Shot16- MS of Courier begging for his life, places suitcase down Shot 17- XCU of Courier’s eye Shot 18- MCU of gun	Courier- Josh Kingsley Jones Hitman- Dominick	Phil- Camera Dominick- Director	Alley B3130 Clevedon	Trilby hat Handcuffs Trench coat Suitcase Fake gun Suit